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In a lot of paintings I miss a certain sketchiness. Things are too fast too detailed. In a portrait-study like this, some of those sketchlines are appreciated. Although in my opinion I would have gone a little bit further. I seem to be missing a large chunk of the body. Because of the fast rendition her breasts are poorly shaped and even hinted wrongly, so my suggestion would be to keep on working a little bit on her breasts and clothing.
Her face on the other hand is, besides maybe a few anatomical issues, well rendered. Because of the very glossy rimlight on her lips, I would draw this further over her face. That would make it more of a whole again.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Peace"/> Yannick